17 October 2022

The Sun Father

 

He is old, so old.

His toil is endless, and every step becomes harder and harder. Just one more, he says to himself, just one more step, just one more day, just one more millennium. But he grows weak and tired.

The Sun rises and there is a brand new day.

How he would have laughed at the idea of himself growing old and frail, once. He remembers those days when he ran with his brothers and sisters under the primordial sky, naked golden skin glistening, pure joy of life and hunt in their hearts. They tore bears apart with bare hands. But those days are long gone now.

The Sun sets and another day is over.

He is doing it for his family. They need him, he says to himself, but he no longer believes they remember. They live for the moment, for passion and action and sensation. Most likely they just forgot about him and moved on, unburdened by the grim thoughts of his eternal labour.

The Sun rises, burning bright for all.

The orb is searing his hands. Once he would cavort in a blizzard and swim in a volcano, but now his skin is blistered from the heat and yet he shivers from the freezing air. But he presses on.

The Sun sets as it did for times untold.

He remembers the day when the old father died. His family was solemn and sombre, a rare sight indeed. The old father toiled for them all, and someone would have to continue the work. He was young and foolish and proud. He volunteered.

The Sun rises and it will do so again tomorrow.

For how long is he going in circles? First, days flew past and he didn't break a sweat, then years and he was bored but determined. Then centuries and millennia and even more and ever more...

The Sun sets, for it never stops.

His chest hurts and he can hardly breathe. His left arm went numb and he more staggers than walks. Yet the work is there and then there is more work, always.

Just one more step.

Just one more step, just one more step.

Just one more...









He is so exhausted.

 

There is a mountain at the end of the world, and a plateau at its top. There is a massive circle scorched into the rock of the plateau. There is a lone golden figure pushing a burning boulder of gold along that trail. And there is the Sun in the sky, forever circling the world, blazing just as the boulder of gold does.

Except the Sun has stopped.

Where did the Sun stop?

  1. Just below horizon, the world is in unending twilight.
  2. Just after sunrise and the Sun is sitting on the horizon now.
  3. The Sun is hanging low in the sky, a morning forever more.
  4. High in the sky, maybe even at the zenith. It burns with unrelenting heat.
  5. Red sky at night, shepherd's delight. Dusk came but the Sun never fully set.
  6. It was night, and now the night will not go away.


Can the PCs find another god willing to take on the burden of the Sun? Or is there another way?

3 comments:

  1. Clearing some old bits of writing here. This should've been an adventure in the spirit world, but it's been chilling in the slush pile for so long it will probably never be more than this hook.

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  2. Gorgeous post! I came across a structuralist analysis of a Luba myth a while back - prime example of the correlation between an academic's ability to present an informative discussion on a topic and their ability to suck all joy out the subject being considered, btw - and the part that stuck with me the most from it was the Tshilubà praise name for the Sun: One-Always-On-The-Move. The restlessness of the Sun, compared to the labors of a homeless slave by the Earth (Chief Immovable) in the ill-considered joke that kicks off the story, seemed pregnant with meaning and this post captures that same feeling so well. There's also something really evocative about the sun just…stopping in place. I'd have been convinced that this was from a real-world folktale if you said so.

    When I went to check the paper in question to confirm the translation of the name, I ran across this passage, which must have slipped my mind entirely. Confirmation of the post's folktale vibe, for sure, but it caught me off guard:

    "Every member of the travelling team had to 'confess' if he had any kind of grudge in his heart against a fellow traveler. Once on the road, it could happen that the sun was setting before they reached the proper camping place. In that case, they 'suspended the sun (in a tree)'. They stopped the sun in its course. The leader simply put a small black termitary in the fork of a tree saying: 'Sun, I hang you up, don't set before I get where I want to go'. No reference was made to any particular spirit."

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    1. Thank you! I don't remember when have I written this, but it might've very well been inspired by folk or fairy tales. :)

      I cannot check now, but I think there was a Grimm tale where the Moon got stuck in a really high tree and the protagonist had to help it. It's interesting how some ideas seem to crop up again and again in different places.

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